This is my final calendar. It's a layout of only one month (january).
The critique:
- system is inconsistent.
- could've been used in black and white, and would have been more suitable for the audience or easier to read.
- use the color to represent an element, not just a design.
- size is not suitable for the audience, make smaller.
- line stroke isn't even.
- icons do not go with the system, it is a weak point in the calendar.
- the space between the numbers need to be modified.
- the column division between arabic and latin is confusing.
- figure out the size, and how it can be practical.
- bind it for presentation.
- explore different formats
- don't change audience last minute :s
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