-I need to make my chart larger so that it is more easily read.
-At the moment the lines mapping the data are confusing for the eye, as they are at a sharp angle. This can be improved by widening the chart's axes.
-Differentiating with line width was a good idea to separate the change in the fetal measurement techniques.
-It is not necessary to have a magnified section of the chart, but instead just make the whole chart bigger.
-Use color to separate the chart from the lines themselves, because by having them both colored black, they merge into each other.
-Find a way of making the crossing of the line through the chart more clear and exact.
-I also made my key more harmonious and simplified by using parallel, horizontal lines instead of arbitrary shapes.
So here are my amendments…
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