Critique-Pornpapha
Get rid of the grey background
change the layout like when I turn from one page to the other-make it more fun and alive.
Let the audience of the catalogue feel the difference when they turn from one page to the other
Work on the bold ,italic thing ..Typography as well.
Don't put the images on one side of the catalogue and the text on another side ..make it playful by switching.
Critique:
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2. Transition from one page to another. Differentiate from one chapter to the next.
3. Typographic style sheet. Function, Hierarchy, Typeface
4. Systems: image treatment, typographic, layout, color, and etc.